When Joan started pouring the bleach on her hair someone in the theater yelled “no!” and we all really felt that.
The satirical business names were hilarious - my family would absolutely shop at “Prayers and Ammo” if that was a real place.
I have a lot of notes on this.
First, while I love her, Kristen Chenoweth actually does not need to be here. It keeps trying to make it about her when it really isn’t. And you can tell she hates reading most of the lines, she doesn’t even pretend to try. Perhaps, she too, was thinking “this isn’t about me.”
Second, the music and editing need some love. Lots of unnecessary down time, Overpowering music, and some very rough transitions.…